The completely finished newspaper

The last version of the school newspaper that I posted (here) required a few changes.  In addition to the missing photo and a couple typos, the school requested some alterations.  First, the article about school violence was cut.  Honestly, I expected this would happen.  It talked about a tragic incident at a nearby school, in which one student accidentally killed another.  I gently suggested that the author of the story choose another topic, but he wanted to write about this one.  I figured I’d go along with it.  I thought it was a story that actually mattered to the kids, and I’d back it until the administration said otherwise.

Because I no longer have the newspaper class, and the kids are busy with exams, I wrote a brief story about the school festival to fill the hole.  I hated to cut the kid’s story, and I certainly don’t need to practice my English, but there wasn’t much I could do.

The second correction involved the soccer team story.  Evidently, the new team, Gangwon FC, held their draft in December.  Because of this, the information in the article was out of date.  Again, I can’t really get a re-write from the kids, so I ended up re-writing one paragraph and making a few other changes to the article.  It’s not really something I was comfortable doing, but the school wanted things changed ASAP.  My co-teacher seemed fine with me doing the writing.

I emailed both students to explain the changes.  I know it’s like a small thing, but it’s their work, and changing it doesn’t seem ethical to me.  I suppose I should learn from my own lessons.  I taught the kids that one of the first steps in writing should be identifying the audience.  You have to be sure that what you write is suitable to the given audience.  The class decided that the audience for the newspaper was teachers, students and parents, but that’s not really true.  The newspaper is a bragging point for the teachers and administration.  More than anything, the goal is advertisement for the school and the people who run it.  As such, the stories must reflect positively on the school.  Unfortunately, this means that accurate information and “appropriate” content are more important than demonstrating the honest (but sometimes flawed) work of the students.

But ignore my cynicism.  I’m still fairly proud of the final copy, and it was (generally) a fun project.

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3 Responses to “The completely finished newspaper”

  1. Lois on December 16th, 2008 7:14 pm

    Great job Mike. Are you sure you haven’t done this before? The boys have done a very nice job too. A pat on the back to all involved.

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  2. Mom on December 17th, 2008 5:11 am

    I am so looking forward to hearing about the “equally exciting” performance at this year’s Winter Festival!

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  3. Sandy K on December 26th, 2008 7:46 am

    Ditto what your mom said. Will this “equally exciting” performance have a country line dance as I heard it might?! The boys (and their teacher) did a great job on the paper. You should be proud of them.

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